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作者: daniel06 時間: 2007-8-8 14:55 標題: ANTI-RONDER CHP1

NOTICE: THIS IS AN ENGLISH NOVEL>>>>>>>
CHAPTER 1
"RON"is a special power,other people call it "super power".
Then why people have "RON"?
There are four reason,
1)God's gift
2)Over motion
3)Scientific effect
4)Accident

In the old time,there are 2 kinds of people who use " RON"
Heros and Villain
but now,just one,Villain,and the other word.....
"RONDER"

Year 2007,the war of the Ronders,
destroys every places in the world,
that called "Ronder tsunami"
it washed away every thing,
that a lad ,Troy b.
hated the Ronder,
then Troy's journey begins
that day when he's last tear drop to the ground.

TO BE COUNTINUED............

本篇是序章
很短吧........... ・一・

[ 本帖最後由 daniel06 於 2007-8-9 08:39 編輯 ]

作者: wat.the.fun? 時間: 2007-8-8 17:50

QUOTE:

原帖由 daniel06 於 2007-8-8 14:55 發表
2 kinds of people

nice try to using english =D
keep on!

作者: daniel06 時間: 2007-8-9 11:56

QUOTE:

原帖由 wat.the.fun? 於 2007-8-8 17:50 發表

nice try to using english =D
keep on!

THANKz,
By the way,after "to",you should'nt change the verb into any other speach.

[ 本帖最後由 daniel06 於 2007-8-9 11:57 編輯 ]

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